Lincoln is more than a vampire-killerTo me, this article is one the best essays I've ever written in any class. The hook was very different and creative. I used the organization of the piece in a way I had never tried before and I thought it worked out beautifully. A major focus on this piece was the use of a more complex and developed vocabulary.
I thought I took a very sincere approach to the article. I didn't sensationalize nor did point out only the negatives. I took everything that had happened, both positive and negatives, and exposed them without letting my own personal opinion seep through.
One of the most mature things I've written. I thought it was a perfect combination of humor and maturity. It helped convey a message while still maintaining a very entertaining reading. The response I got from the community was phenomenal and very refreshing.